A Day at the beach
Today is my birthday,so we are going to go to the beach.My bum was so tired from sitting in the car.We had driving for five hours.Wait!We are almost at the beach…It’s enough!I opened the window.The odor of dad’s smelled like a dead fish was under the car seat.YA!We are at the beach now.As dad was parking the car,the clear blue sea was shining in the afternoon sunlight.The waves were swooshing onto the sandy beach.Dad said,”Lets go for a swim!” “OK!”I said.Yuck!The salt water tingled in my mouth.Mom asked,”Would you like something sweet to drink?” “Yes!”I said.Today is a wonderful day.Later I can have a big cake too!
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